Scene 14: 2013 version vs. 2014 version

Since I revised Scene 13, the scene that immediately follows (Scene 14) also needed to be updated.

Here's the 2013 version of Sc. 14:

Here's the final, 2014 version of Sc. 14:

Scene 13: 2013 version vs. 2014 version

The last post was the pencil test for the revision of Scene 13. Again, below is the version of Sc. 13 completed last year:

And this is the revised completed scene, one year later:

Of course, this meant I also had to revise the scene that immediately follows. The old and new versions of Scene 14 tomorrow.